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Bush:

Overall score 25/30

WWW:
Excellent slides. Minimalist 
Good expression 
Great narrative 
Good film/tv references 
Embedded video/music 
Use of quotation 
Rep of people and places 
Clear research: Industry 
Sophisticated research of Industry
Some media terminology - Demographic.

 EB1:
Too much reading 
Look at audience/positioning 
Media theory?
Student Feedback :
1:
28/30

 www:
Well made, good narrative, I liked it 

 EBI:
Look up more 

 2:
28/30

 www:
Liked the narrative, good research, and well made
EB1:
-

3:
25/30
WWW
Good narrative, liked the presentation
EB1:
Spoke too fast, and you didn't really look up very much

3)
Overall, I believe that my presentation still remains relevant and true. The only real change I've felt like making since the presentation is to keep it slightly grounded, focusing more on the mental struggle of the main character and the effect the events that happen/are happening on him. The aesthetics remain the same and so does the selection of audio/music (Except for one track, I'm going to be using Goodbye by Apparat for the preliminary, and depending on how it looks I may or may not use it.) 

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