Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Wasn't played in front of class. The basic feedback was that it did not meet the brief due to multiple reasons, Concept was good but make sure there is more filmed content in there rather than just using secondhand footage. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene. www: Good concept well paced good use of audio EBI: Need more own filmed footage needs to meet the brief not long enough 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent ? Core elements of what was written in the statement of intent is there but there wasn't enough of it. I feel like keeping it more realistic is important, a chang...